Wow it's been a whole year
We've done so many things
from just talking to making memories
It's your Anniversary
and you need to celebrate it
Go to the movies
or maybe have a romantic dinner on the beach at sunset
It's your day and you should have it your way
I hope you both grow to love
each othr more and more
With each and every day and year
Author notes
Happy Anniversary!
Mem
A contest entry
- Wish Jackie and Me a Happy Anniversary!!! by Andy Stephenson.
525 points, ended June 2, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you saw something else then what was meant to be let out.
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sp othr--other
I liked this because I took something else from it than what you meant. I thought it seemed like a write from a best friend to another, wishing him a happy anniversary. I think she likes him, but she's sucking it up and letting him go. Nice work, poet! I really liked this.
Congrats on the bronze!
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Your quite welcome. I hope much more happiness will come to you both
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Thanks, Mem
Thank you for the anniversary wishes. Jackie and I really appreciate them. We hope that our love grows as time passes and I hope that Jackie and I write many more pieces together. Thanks again.
Andy
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Thanks. I hope you enjoyed it.
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Thank you for this lovely poem .. it was very nice
Be Well
Jackie
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