It's summer, what more do you want?
Well for me it's a trip to Vermont
While I'm away I'll swim
and dive, in the ocean
It's cool and hot
I love it but hate it.
Summertime is great
you have no school and can hang out with friends
I love Summer
I see family only once a year and it's now
Summer is great
so enjoy it
Author notes
Just about summer
A contest entry
- Chill Out This Summer by Aun Ali.
300 points, ended May 26, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you! Hope you didn't fall too hard,
Well my summer is consisting of: New York for a month and two weeks in Alaska. -
A nice, casual poem about summer. The rhyme slung me around a bit, but not too bad. I don't have any bruises.
Anyway, sounds like you're having a great summer. Have fun!
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*smiles* I'm so glad you like it. I only have one more week of school then four days of exams and I am done!
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Positive View
A fairly positive view for hot summers from you in this work. No school, all fun, all happiness make the hot-hot weather a moment for enjoyment. Thanks to enter the contest and all the best.
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