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Sexy Senryu

orgasms music
a couple’s magnum opus  
fervent symphony


Patricia Gibson-Little

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Written July 29th, 2003

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  • Marcellus
    August 20, 2003
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    Cool! Beautiful music it is. Sure got an excellent visual, complete with audio.
    Marcellus


  • maryannde gold member
    July 30, 2003
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    I agree...that was perfect!
    WOW!

    Great great write!
    My best...
    Mary Ann

  • Badness
    July 29, 2003
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    GREAT!!