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Truth

There is a voice inside my head
Says, "I am god, but god is dead."
Says, "all are here and all will die"
"and all your dreams were useless lies"

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  • Tumbleweed
    January 16, 2008

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    This thing won't let me applaud without writing a comment in this box. I have a headache and don't really feel like trying to critique anything or make suggestions right now, wish I could just applaud, but oh well...I'm just going to babble for a while, then copy and paste this comment into the comment boxes on the other poems of yours I want to applaud. You know I think your poems are awesome, anyway. So, blah, blah, rhythm, blah, rhyme scheme, blahdey blah, imagery. LOL. Kick ass poem