A single tear to mark a loss of life,
A single drop of blood to speak her mind.
She was the thier only angel left,
In a world where she was left behind.
Her parent's were blind to her anguish,
The looked over her hurt and her pain.
A drop of blood for her parents ability,
Another tear;;She's back her again.
Society frowns upon her decisions,
The angst, the lies and her scars.
They judge you before they even know your name,
And they don't care about who you are.
A final slice to end all her suffering,
She finds peace in a silver goodbye.
Slowly she stains her parents perfection,
As their last angel begins to cry.
She silently slumps to the ground,
And slowly the floor soaks red.
Forever marking a rememberance,
Of exactly what went on in her head.
All the imperfections stained thier lives,
It was perfection they always adored.
When they became blind to even see her,
The lost thier last angel
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Author notes
Itspeaksabout whatit'sliketo feelunnoticed....
Like.yo.ur.pa.re.nt.s.do.n'.t.no.ti.ce.th.at.you.r.hu.rt.ing.you.r.sel.f..
Youonlywantthiera f f e c t i o n((a.t.t.e.n.t.i.o.n))andthey'rel o v e.
Butthey[[don't]]even[[realizeit]]
A contest entry
- \rain on me/ [[ .make.tears .fall.from.my.eyes ]] by autumns rising.
1000 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
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"Her parent's were blind to her anguish,
The looked over her hurt and her pain.
A drop of blood for her parents ability,
Another tear;;She's back her again."
ya, thats beautiful and i know this all to well.For some reason it seems like something i would write, very similiar are writings are, which means one of us is just damn genious lol
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this is a great poem, it flows really well and holds so much emotion. well done. i can really relate to this piece, keep it up
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I love this so much, it's great.
I know exactly how you feel. This poem is really deep and I can like feel your emmotion and your pain and like I can feel everything I guess. and even your rhyming is great! [its hard to find that nowadays] you should definetley use it. I LOVE IT!!!!
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Thanks
Hopefully the teachers wont say I can't use it because of graphic nature of it.
((Yeah, they'd consider this graphic.))
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This is a great poem, being someone who has felt this to with paretns not noticing what so ever. You've shown really well how that feels and the conseqences it can have. It's such an emotional poem and powerful to read if you've been through it or still are going through it. Well done you should definatly use this poem =-)
xXx
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Thanks.
I'm kinda going through it right now so it's a bit rough.
Burrdifly
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