An over powered rage burns the soul into a deep despair discovered by uncovered darkness
As it's revealed the pain-strickened heart falls in a pit of bloody agony.
Pounding thrusts beats to the outside ear.
Then slowly fades as aspects of new territory are found, the mind grasps hold of faith but then is turned down by unwanted tales.
In time one stumbles in eternal bliss never knowing there is a way.
A contest entry
- Awaken my Mind by Silent Cougar.
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this sounds religious in nature...
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Zzzzzz....Zzzzzzz......
Still sleeping......
good write, but not what I'm looking for yet.
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