why do people act as they do
thy are filled with pain, and dispare to
most are rich, this is sad
becaus all of them should be glad
thy all find resons to be sad
but but most of the resons are very bad
some of them cant handle the pain
i wish that there atempts where in vain
so thy would give up there idea
that pain isnt something thy should revere
A contest entry
- Awaken my Mind by Silent Cougar.
950 points, ended May 28, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The hard part about pain is can consume you and become an addictive force in ones life. It is about breaking the addiction to sadness, pain, hurt and just wanting to be happy.
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