Do you remenber the times?
That you gave me black eyes and split lips.
You put your hands around my throat.
I could hardly breathe.
I cried as my heart broke.
You jerk and bruise my arm .
Why did you not set me free?
There is no way you did or love me now.
I was on bendened knees begging you too .
Please stop abusing me , Dad .
How can I love you Dad ?
When you had abused me for years .
Author notes
option 7
A contest entry
- Options!! by forget my memories.
550 points, ended May 29, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This piece goes really deep and is full of emotions. There is imagery that I wish nobody had to experience. If this is personal, I can only imagine what you've been through!
Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing!
Congrats on the HM!
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This is so sad, so painful. I am so sorry that you lived with this. You captured the pain and hurt, the full depth of it all.
your writings are amazing.
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(hugs) I don't even know what to say to this, it took a lot of courage to write it (hugs some more)
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Wow that was strong i liked it a lot it was very powerful. I loved it I to do not have a good realationship with my dad good luck to you in my contest great job.
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very touching and sad indeed.
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