We make love worth the living
Within art weaving words
I hear you from the distance
Through chirping blue jay birds
You may be shrouding some things
But bliss beams through the sun
My spirit shares your smiles
As we both breathe as one
My path crossed upon yours
Within the breeze of night
You comforted my sad songs
Until dawn's dew of light
Sin may shackle feet to floors
But mercy guides us through
We may outlast future years
Kissing soft lips love drew
Paper pads reveal our hearts
With ink as red as wine
Inscribing ever-after
As two dreams intertwine
Author notes
'purple' << For contest rules.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love is all you need. by Losing Hope.
950 points, ended June 5, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is so beautiful, I loved this and the romance is awesome. I loved the flow of the poem and you two did a wonderful job. Keep penning together that was an awesome poem.
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beautiful
there was a little love bird on my shoulder, and we both agreed that this is a great and romantic poem, there are not many people that can write love poems as good as you i believe! great word-choice and job on this one poppa, i hope to read more soon
your buddy
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Thank you
This poem has been so well put... thank you so much for everything... please read my most recent poem... My father just got diagnosed with Brain Cancer... my life feels it has fallen to pieces... I have to leave class now...
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-hugs-
I'm very sorry to know of this heart-breaking news, I sure hope he gets better soon. I send all my love. Peace.
-Timothy
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Rocks of Love
I agree you do rock at love poems. This is wonderful the imagery is outstanding. The love can be felt by the reader it not dry or overdone. It reveals such beauty from your words. The love you share makes this world a better place to live my brother dear. I love just the way you wrote it. I feel you are such a gifted writer and it wonderful having you here. It makes me the reader feel so alive and feel of hope. They found out what wrong with me another ailment. I am on the road to recovery. Thanks for standing by though the last five months. The love you share has helped me to have hope. Thank you is express from my heart. This may sound strange I feel that you have praying for me. IT has truly help. I will always love you like a sister love b -
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Thanks sis,
I'm glad you do love me, and I appreciate your love and friendship always, peace, your friend and bro, Timothy~
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this is wonderful! such beautiful imageyr and ideas, you have created a fine piece, i especially like the lines;
My spirit shares your smiles
As we both breathe as one
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Paper pads reveal our hearts
With ink as red as wine
such a great poem, i wish you the very best in the contest
lucy
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How Sweet
You really done great. I love it.
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So Soft and Sweet!!!
You have done it again my son. You were born to bring love and hope. Keep them rolling. xoxoxo -
My sweet love brother, this is just beautiful!
Been too long since I've read your wonderful, touching love poetry and so, this is an extra special treat! Your heart speaks beautifully once again! 
Wish you all the very best, honey
Much love,
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Very nice
I love your use of words
They seem to draw you in to reading
And the ending was perfect
Good job
<3Flo
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Wow
Simply Wow My Darling Uncle
I am once again blown away by the beauty you have created with your pen...It was so well penned and I loved each line to be honest
I wish you the best of luck in the contest
May you have a blessed day
Love ya always
Tes
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Thanks
You're so kind my wonderful niece, I love yas.
Thanks for all your support, always, much love, UT~
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Very Beautifuly Written!!!
*hugt* Timothy, I love this poem, it has all the nuances of tender romance, true love, lasting hope, and sweet dreams come true. I love these two very unique lines:
"Inscribing ever-after
As two dreams intertwine"
Well, "Love may be all you need" for this contest, but a little gold trophy wouldn't hurt, right?!!? Good luck, you've written another winner!!! Peace and Love, Cyn
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Thanks,
Nope, the Gold would not hurt..lmbo!
Thanks for your time sweet soul.
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tHIS WAS BEAUTIFULLY PENNED. A BLESSING OF INSPIRED WORDS. I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE. BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY, BEATIFUL RYTHMN, BEAUTIFUL FLOW. KEEP THAT PEN FOREVER FLOWING.
LOVE YA
VICTORIA
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Thanks,
I so appreciate ya, and you know it!
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hun this was an incredible write of a spiritual love and intimate revelation as one. Very well written my dear one. thanx for sending me the link - lol just as i was headed to you page my dear one lol xxxxx much love always
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Thanks,
I guess I was excited for ya to read it..LOL!
I knew you were on your way, so I made it easier for ya.
Haha. Much love to you my friend, thanks for reading us!
Peace, Timothy~
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Beautiful entry and of course I adore it..
Peace
~M~
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Thanks ~M~
I appreciate your inspiration, and the love you show me here my friend. We seem to make beautiful music.
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