Yes and no reply’s he,
He who is inferior
Photography,
Reads the void
In Johna’s mind,
He who flees
Runs from like
Claims the wise man
“Do you know where the power lies?”
Cries the gypsy,
It lies within,
To make love with ones ego…
Starts the one who knows all,
Only a true fool,
Would fall for such childish power,
Dance the color,
Jive the language,
Youth is liberty,
Live it,
Love it,
Life is once,
It’s easy to miss,
The eternal want of the mental thought,
Remains,
Think Columbia,
Everything lasts forever,
Nothing lasts always,
It’s in the stars,
The endless power
The struggle for light,
In a world of darkness,
Goes on,
And life as we know it will,
Cease.
Author notes
This was writen a while ago. I just saw the contest. Looked like a party.
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is pretty good... I really like it. good job! keep it up! and good luck!
Crimson -
I like this.
Very interesting, I was hooked from the title!
I love the lines :
Dance the color,
Jive the language,
They're beautiful.
Thank you for entering and good luck!! -
A rambling it is indeed... The authors note made me giggle a little...
The title really drew me in... It was a very capturing title but i don think that ut suited the poem..
What do I know though? maybe theres something I cant see, i dont know.
thanks for entering though it was a very well written poem
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Very well expressed. The flow of words is awesome. Very imaginative Indeed! Strange and Sweet!!
This part of the poem is the best liked by me,
'The struggle for light,
In a world of darkness,
Goes on,
And life as we know it will,
Cease.'
This is really a good one!!
Best Of Luck to you in the contest!!
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