Every where i go no matter how hard i try i still see you walk by
your breath is bad your eyes are sad.
What you did to me was very life turning.
I know you didn't mean to, but i do not for give you.
every where i turn it's like i am being raped again and again.
I look at my boy friend and i see you, the man who ripped my insides out and locked me up so i couldn't breath.
you made me believe that i am worth nothing. You made me feel very dirty. no matter what i do how much i take a shower i just can't get the stench of you off of me. Do you see what you have done to me?
I hate you i wish you were dead
I wish i could get your memory out of my head,
but i can't because your some one i love your my brother the one i trust. i know that we can never be like family
because you malested me!!!!!
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enter this contest it's great it's called biggest contest in allpoetry history(I hope)
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
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I am not sure how to respond to this other than I am so sorry that you had to suffer through this atrocity!! My heart goes out to you....
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This is such an emotional piece of work. Your pain and anger and grief are overwhelming. Good luck with the contest.
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Wow
Amazing write, even though it depressed me greatly.
I was molested when I was little. I am glad the guy moved, even though he was my best friend too. He apologized, but I kinda never forgave him.
Great write, and I hope if it happened, you get over it.
Some do, some don't.
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I think this piece should go in the contest for the guy who wants to know what goes on inside a girl's head- it will make him think (and you'll have a better chance at a trophy than a contest that's all about getting 1000 entries, and not generating good writing!) As to the brother, if he's worth keeping, he needs to know what such an experience does to a girl, because guys just don't naturally know such things...!
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this is a very great poem but i believe you spelt molested wrong but other then that it was a great write good luck in the contest and please put which option you chose!
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i chose option number 1
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i'm sry for what he did ill help you though it as best i can
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Wow, what a contest you have entered here with this poem. can't beleive one is going to read 1,000 entries, but you could be part of a history making contest now. LOL Think you mean molested in that last line, Such a sad write, so many deep, dark things to think about here. So sorry this happened if it is true. Think something like that takes a long time to get over. Wish you well. Thanks for commenting on Troubled Teen - glad you dropped in.
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try making the lines have the same amount of silibles. it will make the poem flow alot better, very good job otherwise, tyvm for entering!
~!~keep writing~!~
~gasp~
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