...Delicate... features
outlined in black
from too many s-l-e-e-p-l-e-s-s nights
Is this how you like her?
a --> rag doll <-- of sorts
a whore for your own [[pleasure]]
hallucinations |g|o|n|e| wild
&& overabundant
(..cigarette..) butts
on the verge of setting this motel room
made for two on --fire--
Are you ready?
Can you handle what she ♥offers♥?
one W.h.o.r.e.rific night
for only half price
Author notes
option 2
A contest entry
- Options-you won't want to miss out on this!!! by XxrockxXxgirlxX.
450 points, ended May 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very brutal but hell, honest. I enjoyed this write a lot. Truthful, brutal and raw, just like the topic at hand is itself.
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This is awesome. I really like the end of it.
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Classic dirty pretty, nice. I liked it...a lot. Never stop writing cuz you are awesome
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"Can you handle what she ♥offers♥?
one W.h.o.r.e.rific night
for only half price"
that was great, i love how you play with your words,
its great,
thank you for sharing
and much love
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This is so good!
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i love this! its like so frickin awesome...its really really good...wow...i just love it...its like one of the best things i've ever read...i don't know why i like it so much...maybe its coz i'm a whore...i dunno....but yeah....this poems really really good...i love all your poetry....i've actually read all of it...
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