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Stop Pretending

You say you're sorry
But you don't care a bit
You say you're sad
Bullshit
You don't know, you never will
You're not the one who's being killed

How dare you make it all the same?
How dare you make it another game?
You don't care, so stop pretending
Stop acting like you feel my pain

They are silent
Every one
But in an hour
They're out having fun
They don't feel this eternal ache

How dare you make it all the same?
How dare you make it another game?
You don't care, so stop pretending
Stop acting like you feel my pain

You don't care, so stop pretending
Stop acting like you feel my pain
Stop acting like you feel my pain.

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  • MyZeroForever
    March 21
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    I love this


  • forevermyangel14
    February 13, 2008
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    hmm i feel like that a lot to..
    i like the eternal ache part


  • MyZeroForever
    May 16, 2007
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    why dont u jus talk to me?


  • Stripes
    May 15, 2007

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    KEEP IT UP!

    THIS IS SUCH A GREAT POEM..I LOVE THE WORDS..i thinks its a great topic to write about. It atomatically jus pulled my attention and i loved it before reaching the second line...GREAT JOB!!!.. Really good Work.

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