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My last tear

Watch as my tears fall
this pain i feel is real
you were my everything
now I'm your nothing
what am I to do
I am here for you
yet you have left me
Now watch as my last tear falls

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  • bangbaby
    April 15, 2008

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    sad yet so lovely!
    great work i like the line
    :now i am your nothing"
    ouch that was strong!