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Frozen over

ice now fades away
weeping thawing tears again
i will bloom anew

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first haiku that i've put up on AP

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  • CountCrimsonAvarus
    July 14, 2007

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    Pretty good for you first hiku that ive ever seen it makes you feel fresh and new like being reborn into another life. Excellent write.


  • Lily of the Valley
    June 15, 2007

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    This may be your first haiku but you should write more because this one is a very worthy first attempt, which I like very much


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 23, 2007

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    a ray of hope springs eternal. beutifully written. the word weeping makes this, for me. brings life to the image. nice!!


  • Shade Aurelia
    May 23, 2007

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    nice, James. Makes you feel all warm and fluffy, dunnit?


    Shade


  • darkeyes08
    May 22, 2007
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    Nifty job i like it!

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