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Sunset

I sit on my stone, in my blueberry field, that no one knows about but me
I just sit there

I listen to all the sounds
Night animals are coming out and with them comes the sunset
A rainbow of colors
From red to purple and from blue to pink

I hear music in the background
A mixture of emotional, classical, romantic, maybe even some tribal music?
I picture dancing; the most graceful dance you've ever seen
I sit and watch while a dance takes place

All I want is to travel with my dancers as they travel into the sunset
A land of hope and wonder
A land of fewer battles and much more creatures
A land of mystery

As the sunset fades I come back to reality
But I still hum the tune of the sunset and keep it close to my heart.

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  • forget my memories
    May 16, 2007
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    I like the flow of this a lot thank you for entering my contest. i liked it a lot.