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Hiding the sun

The clouds stream across
the sun keeping it from beaming
down below.

A nice warm beach with the clouds above
there is no sun, there is no love.
A picture of the sun gleaming in the
water the clouds move around never touching
the ground. The sun hasn't been found.

Dark and light all in my sight.
some blue in the sky makes me want
to cry.Never could tell what was in the
sky.The sun coming out from behind the clouds
it is all now very visible to me a sudden
Glair left me in despair.


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  • forget my memories
    May 15, 2007

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    Wow i really liked this poem a lot the the flow of it was great everything came together so well thank you so much for entering my contest!