I feel so small
In this big world
As I sit here
And look out
All I see is infinity
The goes on forever
To be lost in shadows
And the skay
Only partially broken
By the fluffy white of clouds
Or the stinging light of the sun
Even time stretches on forever
Cut to chunks by light and dark
But still never ceasing
What is MY purpose
Why am I here
So small, so so small
It's seems pointless
But there must be a reason
So I continue to sit here
And think about eternity
A contest entry
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550 points, ended May 29, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Very good
I liked this poem. It shows what most of teenagers lives are made up with. Insecurity...hesitation...lack of self confidence. I'm not sayiing that you are these things, but that what it seems like you were trying to conceive to the audience. It was well written. I'll keep an eye on you. ;p
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The goes on forever <-- should be, that goes on forever.
And the skay <-- should be, sky.
But my favorite lines are
So I continue to sit here
And think about eternity
And also
What is MY purpose
This is really good besides the spelling errors and such. I really, really like it. Keep it up and good luck in my friend Sam's contest! ♥
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don't think too much, your brain might start to hurt and then might catch on fire. oh wait, that's my brain, never mind.
i don't know what to say about this, it was great.
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This is a good poem. thank you for entering my contest.
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