Its just a feeling that can't rise
As I looked into anothers eyes
My heart felt lost in despair
I felt it my heart tare
I watched them walk across the hall
And help me up from my fall
Their eyes a pretty blue
A slight baby hue
I watch and I listen
But yet it didn't seem to glisten
A heart felt love
Like they fell from above
I went up to them one day
And they shoved me away
My heart felt it split in two
That was my cue
I fell into despair
Like I didn't care
A cold hearted feeling
I am now wheeling
Author notes
about someone you like yet they don't like you back had that feeling before mate it really sucks
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This was really good. A lot like what I'm going through. Thanks for your entry.
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