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In the dark

In the night,

so very uptight.

Shaking inside,

you must decide.

Weather to stay,

surrounded by the night,

or go and pay,

will power with might.

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  • Siby Anan
    June 20, 2007
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    Whoa. There's so much emotion and meaning packed into this. Good job!