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I sit there

I sit there,

So very imaired.

watching you cry,

wanting to die.

Tied to the wall,

hanging there,

holding a ball.

Screaming unfair.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Siby Anan
    June 20, 2007

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    Holding a ball? I don't exactly understand that part. Also, what is 'imaired?'

    I really liked this nonetheless. I could picture it in my head. Except...I'm not sure which ball to imagine :]