*~*Brother*~*
My brother meant the world to me,
In my eyes he did everything right,
Man I even had my brother on a Pedi stool,
One of those days he got in a fight,
Made a big mistake by pulling out a gun,
Guess he wasn’t so great after all huh,
Oh man I really miss my brother,
See he made that one mistake and ill never see him again, he’s in jail now – for the rest of his life!
He will never learn.
Now all I wonder is who had to sell him that damn gun
And why wasn’t he thinking of me when he made that one mistake?
A contest entry
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450 points, ended June 23, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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it's sad that ppl don't think twice before they do something
but yah the poem was pretty good!!
i really liked this part
And why wasn’t he thinking of me when he made that one mistake?
good luck in my contest
oh and also put the option number in the author's comment box thanks!!
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