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Clinging Onto You

Pace the floor
As I wait for you
I'm losing my mind
All this
A sacrifice
Just to feel you
Wrap me in your arms
My temporary high
My ecstacy
I can hope
And pray
That finally one day
All the things we talked about
Will be our reality
That they will come true
You are what i hold
What keeps me going on
You are what I need
You keep me strong

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  • bemyescape1016
    May 15, 2007
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    Great!

    I love the way
    how you could put everything you were truly feeling
    into words
    turned out great!