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Ranas y Peces

Un día,
Yo fui al mar,
Y en vez de las ranas,
Vi que pude croar.

Mi padre poniendo verde,
Y mi madre encogiendo,
Y en un momento, yo lo vi,
Las ranas se estaban riendo.

Ellos ya no saltaban,
De verdad, estaban andando,
Nosotros sentados en los nenúfares,
Y ellos nos estaban mandando-

“Saltad por allí,
Saltad por allá,”
Y en ese momento,
Solo quería a mi mamá.

Pero todo estaba bien,
Cambiamos sitios otra vez,
Pero quedaba un problema más,
Ahora,  era un pez.

Author notes

This was a poem we had to write in Spanish class. We had to write about El Mundo Al Reves. (I guess in English that´s The World Backwards. Anyway, I wrote about frogs switching places with humans... Hope you like it! Hope you understand Spanish too!!

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  • Ray Von
    August 21, 2007

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    Your Spanish is excellent!!

    This is so sweet! I smiled the whole way through! Beautiful imagery and it did flow effortlesly!!

    Lots of Love from your big sis!
    Maria

  • Gate Keeper
    May 25, 2007
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    awesome possum!!!!

    hahahaha, I love it!! very creative! :-D great job with the rhyming, too!