Promise me..
that you will be there for me
if I need to talk to you about anything
and I will do the same for you.
Promise me..
that when you feel as though you are too tired to go on
that you will tell me,
and I will be there for you,
just as I would expect you to do for me.
Promise me..
that when we say goodbye tonight,
you will feel the same forceful pull
and don't you worry, I will do the same for you.
Promise me..
that we will last
that we won't give up on us, no matter what,
that we will make it through it.
Promise me..
that you like me for me
not what I look like, or because of my friends
but for the feeling that we have for one another.
Promise me..
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
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I really liked this poem; it shows the true relationship between you two, and you had great detail. my favorite part was:
Promise me..
that we will last
that we won't give up on us, no matter what,
that we will make it through it.
it's always the right thing, to not give up, and that's exactly what you're saying to do: to keep going and trying. AWESOME write!!
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