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Waste of the picture

There it was
Framed and perfect
a smile just because
me and you
back when our feelings were true

i found it
On my computer
the day when i was so pissed
i was about to go find kelly and shoot her

But there we were
together like old times
a old picture
with all the love signs

I remembered your arms around me
and the kisses lost to the breeze
a calm wind turned violent
A spoken word turned silent

and just as i was about to press delete
i though about how glad i was
that our path's did meet

and now the pictured faded away
floated to the air
waiting for a love of today
like our's was never there

And sure i'll miss you
and you'll miss me to
but our times past
a love that couldnt last

And when I'm making memories new
i'll always think of our old ones
I'll always think of you.

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Danny.

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  • Jeff.W
    May 15, 2007
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    AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

    That is so sad and sweet.I love it.It is a beautiful poem.It is very lovely,my favorite lines are:

    " I remembered your arms around me
    and the kisses lost to the breeze
    a calm wind turned violent
    A spoken word turned silent"

    Keep up the great work