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The Forgotten

The end has finnaly come
Its here to claim us all
so gather your thoughts
and watch them as they fall
We the forgotten,will stay
We never were given the chance
Its time for us to find another way
You must go and leave us now
For ever shunning us out
We will swear and vow
To never let you hurt us again
What do you think of us now that you are dead
Would you do it agian
It was better done then said
Yes we brought the end and let you fall

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  • Bloody Scars
    May 16, 2007
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    WOW

    This was really well-written! I enjoyed it very much!
    A Really Awsome Job on this!!!