Life is so boring when the server is down.
there is nothing to do...
no one to talk to...
what should i do?
what is there to do?
Shall I climb bamboo
to see a bird go cuckoo.
Shall I play a kazoo
when i get a new hairdo.
Shall I write a haiku
when there is nothing to do.
Shall I learn kung-fu
to beat up Pooh.
Shall i get a canoe
and eat a cashew.
Shall I go to the zoo
and see an ewe.
I'll ride the ewe
and scream wahoo
shall I become a gumshoe
and have a breakthrough.
Shall I shoo a shrew
and rescue you.
shall I buy a muumuu
and wear it with a tutu.
Shall I go on yahoo
to find a clue
so I have something to do.
What should I do
there is so much to do
Life is so boring when the server is down.
Author notes
The Game I play closes down on Tuesdays and its always a boring day. Not much else to do but write a silly poem about my boredom ~Saphiria
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For a "nothing to do" poem, it's okay. But, boredom shouldn't create something of this accord. But, I know how it is (in the writing of this piece), back in the day I used to write nonsense poems like this. But, years later I realized: that's all it'll ever be. Not meaning to put your piece down, it's fine for what it is; not really a poem for a Contest. Just a thought.
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Niiiice
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You have met both criteria here, weird and funny. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Yes! This is sooo true! Yaay! This is hilarious! You took a simple concept and made it freaking awesome! SOO many props to you!
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We could also do That
This is a very creative poem, I mean. Brilliant ideas like these are so hard to come by. But I really, really, like it
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