Spring
Gentle rain
makes everything new,
A renewel and reborn
the tree's buds sprouts
into the pretty pink flowers
fawn and rabbits are the signs of spring
Summer
siting under the willow tree
for the shade
to get away from the warm sun
eating ice-cream cone
on a hot day
Seagull dives in the water
to cool himself
Autumn
Maple leaves changes
colors into the yellow, red, brown
the leaves carpets
the earth
Winter
we drink hot coco
we wear our hat and mittens
to feel warm
from the long cold winter
But our friends come
and go just like the four seasons
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love your form, style and your strucure. You write so beautiful. I love the colorful words you used. Great job. God bless you in all that you do.
Tabitha -
Lovely thought. I liked that. You need to re-read your work to check for spelling errors and grammar errors.
about your last two lines. Some friends stay friends for a life time. -
Very beautiful piece here....love nature poems and especially about the seasons...so well expressed...smiles, Terry
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cool
i like it
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