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Lonely

Insides raging with cold fire,
Tormented daily

Burning my soul


Watching wearily from afar
Jealously taking hold
Disillusioned

Holding the dagger
I stand outside your bedroom
Wondering when you'll notice

Blood spills onto the ground,
Crashing to the depths below
The darkness creeping in

Death grasps at my heart
Shaking it from it's hold
A whisper escapes me

 

Ghostly devils surround me

Laughing, taunting

Pushing me towards life

 

Her screams echo in the back of my mind

Someone's shaking me

Then I realize it's her

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  • Myth Of Twilight
    May 26, 2007
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    short and sweet and a true peace of work thank you for joining and best of luck inb my cntest


  • MagazinesFall
    May 25, 2007

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    Your amazing ability to use these words to make me feel the emotion like its mine, is crazy. I love your writings so so so so much!


  • 245Trioxin
    May 15, 2007

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    Interesting and avant-garde. I like your unique perspective.

    "Ghostly devils..."pushing you towards life"" That was the best line I've read in quite sometime.