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all I need is your love

I wake everyday to call you.
I sleep everynight dreaming of you,                                                                  I see you and all I do is smile,I cant help it.
I cant stop thinking of you, you grab my hand and we walk away.
In front of everyone you kiss me when you get home you call me.
Every weekend we are together,and I cant get enough of you.
You hold my stomache and talk, your son is in my womb.
WE are a family and we are happy.
I could go without clothes,
Writting, friends and phones,
All I need is your love.
Hold me close,
Grab your son.
Kiss my lips,
Tuck him in.
Lay beside me,
Wish him a good night.
I dont need anything in the world.
All I need is your love.

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  • Losing Hope
    May 16, 2007
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    you and all I do is smile,I cant help it.
    I cant stop thinking of you, you grab my hand and we walk away.
    In front of everyone you kiss me when you get home you call me.

    that's my favorite part
    such a soft poem
    and so gentle and sweet
    and the ending finished it amazingly
    good job



    <3Flo


  • Dirty and Broken
    May 15, 2007
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    hmmm...


  • I Luciferi
    May 15, 2007

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    A poiem about me, aw. J/K! This is really good sweetness. I feel the same way about the other girl in my life that isn't my girlfriend minus the son thing... no kids. Hope you are having a fantabulous day!

    -David