I am mud, beneath your foot
tracked as shadow lost in deeper shag,
where I let myself be scattered
amongst the crumbs of life,
adding my dismembered bits of grey
A contest entry
- Appealing Colors, Darkened Souls by EatYourSunlight.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very serious and deep write. Wonderfully done in 5 lines. A pleasure to read, thank you for sharing.
Congratulations on the will desreved Gold, dear poet!
Best...
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very deep, laying the heart out for all to see
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Wow!
Love how You presented this piece
Short and sweet with a punch at the end~
What a way to honor Grey~
Beautiful job on this one...
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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