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Black

I’d describe myself the color black...
Laying all emotions aside
Setting away all feelings
I’d burn within the soul
And die within the flames

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  • gothkat2
    May 15, 2007
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    cool i like it


  • arafura gold member
    May 15, 2007
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    within the flames...

    Very nicely written. Much said in few words!

    Good luck with the contest!