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Yellow for sure

If I were any colour I'd be yellow
For sure, chicken to the core, I'd
Be yellow, I can see it as I speak, a
Yellow me, and I think my friends
Would agree, sad yellow, let it go.

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  • Congruence
    May 15, 2007

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    Again, okay, feels more like a snippet or a section of a poem, I liked the last line and the 'let it go' part, that worked well.

    Good luck.