Hands outstretched, wanting,
Ignored, looked at with disdain,
Just because they need.
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This is really good, it stays on course and is not hard to link together, a rarity in Haiku's.
The subject is real and the situation is real, very thought provoking.
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Hands outstretched, wanting,
Ignored, looked at with disdain,
Just because they need.
Thank you for entering mu ku contest. This write is a good analogy of how many people look at the less fortunate today. -
It is a sad world when attitudinal lines of longing become misconstrued.
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This is an excellent haiku and so well expressed
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coool
short sweet and to the point!!
conveys the feeling of ignoring beggers
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this is real cool
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