Met an Angel who’s been in and out of hell, Her own body she was forced to sell-
She's met the devil's eyes so many times that she's learned to despise him so well.
He gave her pain of a broken heart, shattered dreams tore her apart-
But no need to go back to the past, coz this sadness could break me down so fast-
But within this sadness there's no pity you see, I just want to crush the men who stole the leaves off her tree-
But it's too late coz that was all then, and I won't let the devil touch her soul again-
coz now she's in my life, she took away my loneliness, my hurt, and my strife-
no longer does my death speak to me, I had my own devil but the angel set me free
Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed this poem. very nice work. it's not real long or anything, but it's full of emotion and feeling. great job!
-ImperfectPerfection
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a happy ending
for a woman who had know no happiness before meeting you. You were her angel also. Good rhyming and story in this poem.
Smile,
Judy
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a response...perhaps?
a fallen angel whose wings may be torn
but the battle shes fought is not one that mourn
we find her in cities in alleyways dark
we find her in gutters cold and stark
shes the watcher of truth
yet the epitome of sin
no one knows where she
goes or has been
she calls to the broken,
defeated they lie,
she smiles at them, a token
to remember her by
then she lifts them away
to a place that shes found
to keep them all safe
from a world that is bound
so this is to you
one who has met
a special one who
is an angel of death
may she bring you the peace
she has given to me
may her kiss bring you justice
and your mind she'll set free -
aww... beautiful. can feel the love in this piece, the desire to protect, and the appreciation. but most of all the love. i do like this piece. well done!
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