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A Butterfly

A butterfly wanting to fly
Right into the vast sky.
Wanting to be free,
But the cocoon won't let it be

Nobody steps to change their choice,
Nobody can hear the soft voice.
This butterfly is all one
The happiness is all gone.

the soft sound of freedom,
Heard in the distance.
It is close the buttrfly can feel it,
But it slipped away bit by bit.

Now a tragedy has come, and
Now you're feeling like a bum.
"Cause the butterfly gone
When you're feeling most alone.

If you were over here
Instead of going over there
You could've seen the butterfly
And realized that all it wanted to do was fly.

     
   
 

 



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  • Tabitha-Robin
    May 15, 2007

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    This is a beautiful write. I enjoyed it much. I think you speak volumes within this write. Keep it up. God bless you.

    In Christ,
    TAbitha


  • Samplette gold member
    May 15, 2007

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    This is a beautiful write. It has a very sad undertone. Gives a powerful feel of loneliness. A great piece of poetry.
    Sam