rollerblades, park bench, New jersey, Venus... SUNSET. [reasoned]
[SUNRISE]
Roll along the street and
i'll meet you on my feet.
[THAT]
[wait for my love, love.
wait for my smile.
wait for my eyes
and i'll see you in a little while.
~ [wait for me]
I love to hear music
and laughter and joy.
love everyone and everything
with all your heart, don't toy.
~ [love is beautiful]
Some people hate, but
that does no good.
emotion is so fickle, but
do what you think you should.
~ [hate does no good]
there is a reason to smile and to laugh.
there is a reason to love.
there is a reason to reach for the stars
and to seek what you're dreaming of.]
[there is a reason]
the park bench was empty
til we came along and danced
down upon it to our own little song.
[WONDERFUL]
The trees are a mystery, like
the snow white clouds above.
finding New Jersey while reaching
for love.
[APRIL]
[Never to complain,
i'll wait all that i must.
determined to breathe deep
and in my heart feel trust.
~ [i will wait]
all the good things will come,
though it's tough to wait it out,
I'll push through all the hard times
to find out what life is all about.
~ [good will come]
Touch is such a mystical thing
and worth all the world when compared.
touch is often worth the wait
when something like love is shared.
~ [touch is magical]
Letters form words and words form sentences.
sentences make paragraphs and paragraphs are grand.
paragraphs fit together to make a lovely letter
or a poem so sweet than anything ever planned.]
[words express emotion]
"A whole new world"
above us an "endless diamond sky"
but the first bright diamond seen
was Venus, a faraway place with a brillant sheen.
[DAY]
[In the most relaxing of times
the piano is playing softly
my heart slows, my mind stops racing
the notes drift over me loftily.
~ [piano playing is relaxing]
The sky and the grass
and the trees all meet.
joining together to illustrate a symphony,
blue and green and sweet.
~ [nature is beautiful]
While the world and my words
may be found ridiculous,
my words and the world have an
unbound pattern quite meticulous.
~ [sometimes things are ridiculous]
As the trees are found budding
and the minds of the young maturing,
the pattern of growing up is
sometimes reassuring.]
[turning a new page, sprouting a new leaf]
As the sun set,
two people finally met,
in a new light,
in the sunlight.
[SUNSET]
Author notes
i wanted to write, but the words and the inspiration escaped me. at the top you see my own little word bank -some random words, some carefully measured words- there are three or four different bits all strung together in this random piecemeal poem. brackets and capitalization sort of separate the separate ideas. this whole thing is just kinda odd... and a bit ridiculous as i hinted. i'm kind of amazed something actually came from the randomness at the top.. of course it is nothing compared to a piece with proper inspiration, but still it is something.
bits of it can be dedicated to my boyfriend.. and he should know the bits.. other parts kind of hint to my sense of the world and other pieces sort of provide a cryptic code to living life or something... this really took me too long. and now, i must retire for the night
how did my randomness suit you?
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this was gorgeous, babe. I could def sense the parts about G fizzle. :]
"paragraphs fit together to make a lovely letter
or a poem so sweet than anything ever planned.]"
Are you implying...a poem so much sweeter than anything ever planned? This is the only thing i noticed that seemed a bit off, but i really like the broken up sound of the sentance, and it still makes sense.
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rollerblades, park bench, New jersey, Venus... SUNSET. [reasoned]
i'm not sure how you can call that reason. personally i think you would have been wise to say no. then again i'm glad you didn't.
wow, i must say this is an impressive piece.
as anyone should know i'm a whore for imagery, and metaphore, and that certain way of saying something without saying anything at all.
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thanks ; )
ha, reasoned wasn't regarding the decision.. it was regarding the set of words in that line.. i have an actual reason for them.. the other list, i looked around for inspiration and i saw things that triggered those words... i literally looked around my living room for them. haha. that sounds ridiculous now, but i wanted to write and i didn't what. -
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let's go to NJ. what time you wanna meet?
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ASAP. i have to get out of this town. missing you!!
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