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Lake of Lakes

Staring at the clouds
I dream with all my heart
And suddenly, before my eyes
Secrets drift apart
A picture is unfolded
A landscape of perfect view
Wonders beyond human compare
Colors screaming bright and true
A mountain range of purple grey
Behind a spring of flowing water
Beauty, I can't understand
How a trickle can seem so pure
This land I see is perfection
Peaceful
Quiet
Calm
Mere words cannot describe it
The radiance is too great
This lake of lakes,
Worthy to be God's own
Befre my eyes
I was blessed to see
Depths of no compare
Mystical, majestical
Unreal
Too good to be true...
I wish I could disappear
Into this world
Where everything is at rest

...please, please don't leave me alone

Author notes

Wrote this about a year ago now, just found it while looking through old papers. It's describing a sunset I saw on the way home from SWC last May. Honestly, it was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen.

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  • Alyss in Wonderland
    May 15, 2007
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    oh! and i got accepted to that poetry book thing too. =]

  • Alyss in Wonderland
    May 15, 2007

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    woooooooooooooooooooooooow. really awesome poem. =] are you gonna write another on the way home from SWC next week?