Silken contact through consented whim
The lips touch quickly then disperse
Back to their original places.
But each pair cannot deny
The intense heat still lingering
Around facial features.
So with a great need,
Pairs return once more,
Once, twice, and three times again
Until they are wrapped in passion unstoppable;
The point of no return.
Grabbing hair, limbs, and clothes
Trying to hold balance against the subtle rythm
And not break away;
But trying more fervently
To become glued to the partner
And sustain the true nature
Of the very first kiss.
Author notes
*MUAH* lol
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired - Kiss by Random Thoughts.
700 points, ended May 20, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance Poems, Please No Adults by Angel Eyed Baby.
600 points, ended December 11, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Interesting yet Rolling On Floor Laughing My Ass Off
Now I have enver truly kissed any of my g/f because well we just wer enotat that level but anyw ays off that I cna see this comical comedy like sketch taking place and it makes me roll on the floor dieing from laughter becaus eits extremely comical and well the mental picture you get from it is just extremely hilarious! anyways nice work and keep it up
Signed, Paul
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well written decribing the thoughts, feelings, heat and passion of the fervent kisses of love.
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Lions Auction #1
You really described the stages really well
You put every feeling into it
And every little moment perfectly
I could feel the emotions
I could feel the passion
But it was anything but my first kiss!
Let's not go there!
Well done
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LIONS AUCTION # 1
This is a journey which I have traveled ~
There seemed to be many
steps in this process...yet
in the end,,,,we reach the
Point of No Return ~
Very well penned and well
thought out Theme ~
The best to you in this contest ~
Bear ~
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Lions Auction #1
Long ago are the days when I felt this passion. You've captured it beautifully in this piece. Your descriptions are spot on. There's truly nothing like a first kiss. >pixxie<
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LIONS AUCTION #1
Great description of the heat and intensity of passionate kisses. Very warm! Well done.
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Lions Auction #1
What a great job you did on this! I love it!!!! Soft and romantic. But oh how true your words!!!!
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This was amazing. It captured me. You turned something so simple into passion and poetry. Well done.
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This was such a fantastic read!!
This is exactly how it is,
The wording you used allows the poem to flow as does the situation, really well done,
Visually amazing, awesome effort,
Best of luck and thanks for the entry,
-Brenden
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