The cruelty of the dark
left them to their own defenses,
and the filthy conditions
of their existance,
was more than you
can comprehend...
A martyr for the family,
she went to willingly,
even with trepidation,
the assault on the psyche
was more than could be tolerated.
Malevolence in it's greatest form
took hold and seeped it's oil
from the depths of your bowels.
It strangles you with
it's every being
and diminishes
your very existence
The dissolution
of your mind
and soul
is met with merriment
and is for
your viewing pleasure
Asinine well wishers
in the sea of desparity
consume my being
and leave me incomplete
In a list
A contest entry
- 5 Different Options by Deviant Dreamer.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is wonderfully written, but when I got to the end, I was expecting there to be more. The imagery leads me to believe so anyway...nevertheless, this was an exquisite write. Thank you very much for entering.
-Shae -
whoa nelly... this is deep and so dark! i fuckin' love it! your writes seem to get closer and closer to my own thoughts/feelings... great job and good luck!
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