I can make you cry.
I can make you hate.
By the time someone finds me
it will be to late.
I keep you locked up
inside your own head,
filling your thought
with pitty and dread.
I make your body ache
and torture your mind.
To all good things
you become blind.
I drag you down and
ruin your self esteem
but don't worry, that's all part
of my master scheam.
When thoughts of death fill your head
my work here is almost done.
I pack my bags and prepare to leave
the day you buy the gun.
When you pull the triger
I suddenly disapear.
For I am depression,
Making you your own worst fear.
Author notes
monkey
I guess this is opion 1 or 6
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Oh no way, i really enjoyed reading this. The sad part while i was reading this i thought of my friend who commited suicide, he blew his head... off, and it actually made me start to cry. The words at the end "For I am depression,
Making you your own worst fear." They were [had] to be the most powerful thing of this poem. Well wrote, thanks for entering my contest.
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I'm adding this to my bookmarks lol
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For I am depression,
Making you your own worst fear.
WOW!... perfectly explains depression... awesome poem
i don't know what else to say ^^^ those lines were amazing! keep it up! ~Jessi~
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Another amazing poem. I am thinking that the last three that I have done are by the same person, and if so, thankyou for the great writes. If not, then this is still a great write. Good luck in the finals. -
Aw, but does it disapear after the blast. A cruel but piercing question. I think you did a good job with this. Despite an apparent lack of meter the rhymes werent so bad. You should really feel special that I'm being nice cause this type of poetry is very uninspiring to me.
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i really love this!
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this is very creative. it didnt make me cry though, ive been through far too much, and im not that emo, but this was well done, very insightful. you might want to do some spell check thought, just a suggestion.
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Oh my gosh, I'm serious, you are one of the best writers I've met on here! You're going to be famous someday! Lucky! haha.
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ummmmmmmm.......WOW!!! this is amazing!!! i've delt with depression for a few years now and this is basically how i've always felt about it. thankyou so much for writting this...it's amazing.
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Oh My God!
Hey! i loved this poem!! its soo great! my fav verse was the 5th one! that pretty much sums it all up for everyone!
ANd its true that depression does this! anyways! byeee!
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wow
that was so good all the writes of yours ive read so far are so god i love your writeing style i really liked the last 2 paragraphs of this poem the most was SOOO good keep up the good writes
tom
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