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The Truth!

It's been so long
But my feelings are still strong

I can't help the way I feel
You are the one I always found ideal

You captivate my eyes
I can't help but release content sighs

You make me smile
And make all my time worthwhile

But I know I have to wait
Though all my mind does is debate

Do it, or do not
What is my story's plot

It troubles me so much
I long for your touch

Just to hug you was the best
And I never would have guessed

That you still loved me
And from you I never wanted to be free

I was just afraid
And listened to confusion's serenade

But now I see clearly
The truth is: I feel for you dearly.

Author notes

Another from the heart. I am so confused.

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  • Three Doves
    June 30, 2007

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    Love will play the gambit to confuse and conceal. Well done with your expression "But now I see clearly the truth is: I feel for you dearly." The saga continues " I was just afraid and listened to confusion's serenade." Such a great piece of poetry through emotion that speaks loudly to the reader.
    Thank you for sharing.