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The state of The Affair, 4:45PM, 07/28/2003

It’s so real away from here
Scared alone.
The Italian in me always there,
Another’s eyes surrender
Just the outside looking in
Gotta make it through
True
Could?
These are the lies I told before

The colors of the bricks, that same old guy
That my mind will rest
Them, tearful love, hand in hand
Take me with you
Look to you
Take me to see

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Written July 28th, 2003

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  • Foxfire
    September 26, 2003
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    Open to interpretation, they say? I think that is very good for a poet to be able to do such. I ... tend to not be able to. Very nice read, indeed.

    Thank you,
    ~Fox~

  • Odyssey
    August 4, 2003
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    grinzzz...well, he does have wonderful ideas.

    Ah the way poetry pushes and pulls us in all sorts of directions...



  • Valkricry
    July 28, 2003
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    LOL Steve seems to have started a trend. I'm sure he'd be happy to see his idea in action like this... Titles as a poem...who'd a thunk it??? (Besides Steve, of course) Good job. ~~~Val


  • Tiffany Amato
    July 28, 2003
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    wow

    Very creative take. Again open to interpretation. Must mean something special to the writer, yes?
    Keep Feelin' Fascination,
    ~Tiffany~