I am your Christmas fairy sat on top of the Christmas tree,
whilst you are having all your fun please spare a thought for me.
My tree is decked with tinsel and baubles by the score,
with lots of multi-coloured lights I couldn't ask for more.
I love this festive time of year, I adore my pride of place,
my elegant dress of organza my wings of golden lace.
Please listen to your fairy and let me have some fun,
and move this flipping Christmas tree from up my flipping bum!
A contest entry
- LIAR, LIAR, pants on FIRE (everyone welcome) by .
375 points, ended May 25, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me smile, rock my world, make me love you baby by Stardust100.
550 points, ended December 10, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheer Me Up In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write a Short Silly Poem - Paying It Forward Contest by poetrandy.
1000 points, ended December 15, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely done. I like the sweetly flowing, lightly rhyming rhythm with the snap at the end.
There is a certain amount of satisfaction in being part of a Holiday presentation, but the Christmas Fairy says it for most of us, that we do want to just get down off the pedestal or stage and make merry with all others at some point. She says it well that having to be "on" all the time can be a real pain in the... !
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still gigling
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Glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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Very LOL!
This one is really cute! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for the HM, glad it gave you a laugh
~sugar~
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congrats on the gold! Indeed the list few lines were very funny and visual as well. I can see how pine needles would be tiresome and uncomfortable. Thank you for this humerous entry
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Glad you enjoyed, thank you for the congrats and your comment
valued & appreciated ~sugar~
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LOL!! I'll never view my tree toper in quite the same way again! Thanks for this delightful entry in my contest and all the best to you at judging, Cathy
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Too funny!
I love when there's a fun twist at the end, you made me chuckle! Wonderful write! Thanks for sharing! I like your rhyming scheme and the rhythm flows nicely. I thoroughly enjoyed this!
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Thank you for your comment, made me laugh writing it.
I haven't been writng all that long just since May of this year really. Glad you enjoyed it.
Have a Merry Christmas.
~sugar~
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i see this piece was in one of my contest, it's a great piece, love the flow.
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It was I threw it in for a bit of fun.
Appreciate you reading and commenting
~sugar~
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I can clearly see why this won a bronze and a gold.
This is so cute, very fun to read.
The ending had me laughing my butt off.
I just love this piece.
Loveandblseeings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Hi Joyce thank you for your comment
It had me LMAO! writing it.
~sugar~
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Wow! this one really cheered me up. I love the rhyme pattern and the flow of the read was well balanced so smooth it was like warm honey..Merry Christmas Sugar...novy
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I am glad this has cheered you up, made me laugh writing it.
Merry Christmas to you...novy
I appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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Congrats on the trophies!
This was so cute and shows your sense of humor. Keep Writing!
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Hi, MahoganyFlow
Just feeling Christmassy
Appreciate you reading
~sugar~
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Hilarious
That was so ridiculously hilarious! No wonder it won a trophy. Genius!
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Cheers bro for reading
Thought it would make you laugh.
~sugar~
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Excellent sis....
how did I miss this one?
Well nevertheless, I loved it even the more today
Great job on the imagery, very humorous piece
See you are behaving today
Just kidding.....love ya
Piff
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Thanks sis, this is one of my first poems I wrote before joining AP I did it for my daughters school play. Thought as Christmas is coming I would throw it in.
Sis I thought you knew me I am always behaving, you know I amic 
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Very, Very Funny !!
Congratulations on the Gold Trophy. It's thoroughly well deserved. This makes me smile every time I read it. It's very very funny !! Thanks for making me smile & cheering my day. All my very best wishes from Rose xx
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Thank you for your lovely comment, I was killing myself with laughter as I wrote it, it still makes me laugh now.
I am glad it has helped to brighten your day.
All the best ~sugar~
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HAHAHA brilliant this reminds me of one I wrote about the reindeers great loved it oh I just know this contest is going to be a tough one to judge well done!!!
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Thank you for the gold
~sugar~
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BREATHTAKING!!
HAHAHAHA, BRILLIANT I LOVE THE BACKGROUND AS WELL. REALLY BREATHTAKING. THIS PIECE I REALLY ENJOYED READING!! WONDERFUL
WAYNE
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Thank God it's not Christmas every day of the year!
Please listen to your fairy and
let me have some fun,
and move this flipping Christmas tree
from up my flipping bum!
LOL!!! These last lines were exquisite, Baby - and gave this humorous piece a nice twist! Some people may like something up their bums every now and then BUT who would want it day after day! He! He! Thanks for sharing this with me and Congrats on your Bronze Trophy!
Piece and Love!
Earl.
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haha very funny and very well written you made me laugh
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this poem is awesome i really love it
i love chrismas so much
your poem was AWESOME
your a great poet
thanks a lot for entering my contest
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Thankyou
I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comments. I wrote it for my kids school play last year.
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I am your Christmas fairy
sat on top of the Christmas tree,
whilst you are having all your fun
please spare a thought for me.
My tree is decked with tinsel
and baubles by the score,
with lots of multi-coloured lights
I couldn't ask for more.
I love this festive time of year
I adore my pride of place,
my elegant dress of organza
my wings of golden lace.
Please listen to your fairy
and let me have some fun,
and move this flipping Christmas tree
from up my flipping bum!
I think this delightful poem would read much easier if it were written out in poem form like above. Although it does not influence my judging if left as is either. Just thought I’d throw it out there for you. I think this write is quite clever and the ending… AWESOME
I am putting this in the finalist area, nice work! I enjoyed, thanks for entering my contest and well wishes to you
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unknown poetess
Thanks for your comments i'm just getting used to a computer and didn't know how to write it has you have done. The way you have done it would have been my preferred choice. I have had a bit more experience on my comouter since writing and now know what button to press. I wrote this for my children one christmas.
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