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Wings so Fragile

I looked up
Into the sky
And saw something
Flying by
Just a blur
Against the sky

What was it?
I had thought
But knowledge of it
I had naught
I did not know
But had a thought

It could have maybe
Been an angel
With flawless white
Wings so fragile
A delicate, faultless
Perfect angel

But I wasn’t sure
I could not know
Unless it made another show
Only then
Would I surely know

There! Again!
I saw it budge!
Above the clouds
A tiny nudge
Of slight movement
I saw it budge!

Excitement washed
Through my soul
I felt as if young again
I felt like a foal
Prancing through a field
And loudly sang out my soul

It could have maybe
Been an angel
With flawless white
Wings so fragile

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  • individuality gold member
    May 14, 2007

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    a good piece, smiling and wispy like a dream thank you very much for taking the time to enter this contest and the very best of luck to you.