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You ARE The One

What more can be said to make you love me?
What more can be done?
Darling, I’ve told you all along,
That I thought you were the one.
You’ve chosen to ignore my feelings,
My hurt…

Maybe I haven’t made this clear enough…
I shall say it again.
I love you, honey, I always have.
I adored you before we were born,
I loved you in the last life, this one and the next.
You are the one for me…


What more can be said to make you love me?
What more can be done?
Darling, I’ve told you all along,
That I thought you were the one.
You’ve chosen to ignore my feelings,
My pain…

My love for you is like a baby bird.
It has to be pushed out of the nest,
Before it can understand how it is to fly.
And this baby bird...well,
It has to be prodded…
Before it can know how to SOAR.

What more can be said to make you love me?
What more can be done?
Darling, I’ve told you all along,
That I thought you were the one.
You’ve chosen to ignore my feelings,
My love for you…

I want to be the one to make your heart take flight …
I NEED you to understand the fluttering and flipping,
My heart does whenever you are around
I want to be the one to make you smile.
Do you understand now, sweetheart?
I want to spend the rest of my life with you…

Author notes

There's no use in any of this though, my love.
Even as I write these words I know...
That you will never understand the intensity...
Of my love for you... it equals the sunbeams...
So I shall sit back and try to ignore these feelings.
Maybe if I ignore them long enough they'll disappear

...Inspired by Hinder's "By The Way"...and by that certain someone...who continues to ignore the feelings I have...

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  • XxHopefulDreamerxX
    May 16, 2007

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    WOW

    This was a beautiful piece! SO much power & emotion! The Pain and confusion you have in this piece just jumps out of the piece its self! You have expressed yourself extremely well!!! I am so sorry about what you are going through I have been right where you are! If you ever need some1 to listen to you I love to listen to ppl's problems and I love to help!! Great write!!!!


  • RyanOfPara
    May 16, 2007

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    One thing to remember

    Once bitten twice shy is a statement true for both girls and guys, who have had relationships fall through. I cannot absolutely guarantee that I did not run into my marriage with my eyes still clouded by the heartbreak of my own lost love. Do not give up on him, but rather take care of yourself such that he no longer feels that he has to take care of you as a brother. Thereby freeing him to see you in a different light, more as a partner on the road of life rather than a younger sibling who needs a mentor. Looking towards your own future regardless of who it is with, shows maturity of thought. Do you both have similar goals? Will your choices in careers be compatible? Generally helps if they are in the same field, or at least semi-connected. Commonality is key. Though having too much in common is dangerous. Yin and Yang theory. Anyway, just a few things to think about.


  • Wrozes Thorne
    May 14, 2007
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    aww, it's so sweet. i can see how you can get this from "by the way."