I hope you won't be mad,
That we won't talk for a while.
I need some time to think,
To forget about your smile.
I need time to think,
To forget about your eyes.
I know it won't be easy,
I promise that i'll try.
I need time to forget,
All thoes time we spoke so late.
I need time to forget,
Wanting to take you on a date.
I know it won't be easy,
Because my love is real.
As long as you will stay my friend,
I'll try to change the way i feel.
I know that it will be hard,
But i'll try to do my part.
For now i'll just try and deal,
With this shattered heart.
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A contest entry
- whats it like for you? by lonelyvampireboy666.
300 points, ended June 16, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes. by warrior-eagle.
600 points, ended October 3, 2007, 50 entries
Honorable mention
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beautiful write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
completely amazing the way you have expressed your broken heart......
much love -
For now i'll just try and deal,
With this shattered heart.
I love the whole poem,period. I have felt like this too and yes I have said the same thing too, "....i'll just try and deal with this shattered heart." I guess i dealt with it as in I am here. Anyhow this is very great and emotionally.I loved it.great. -
this write is great
keep it up and good luck
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awww...this is so sad! I love the poem, though. I know it came from the heart.
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aww hun this is beautyful but don't worry me and howy broke up it was a mutual thing but yeh.. anyway i love the poem
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I was just thinking about the perfect girl
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