My deathbed pre ridden of morbid men
as they cut my wound with rusted steel
and a mask on my face "now count to ten"
but a slash on the tank, now i can feel
how caring a doc
my wound bleeds with no end
and the pain with the treatment, what a shock
till my early death ill make pretend
this pain is worse than my addiction
those assholes cut up my hope
these "docs" all play with sick shit
i was better off on dope
Author notes
low rate docs are such assholes. this ones for the so called "healers" that re open scars
A contest entry
- Angry,hurt, loss,and the docotors who dont give a shit by bobanangel.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 9 entries
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Shit happens and usually the shit hurts is all im going to say, good write...
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lol. this was great! sry i have no applauds because i ran out...
but i would give you three if i had some!
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good write babe!!
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Great write!!!! well done makes me think what my father went through exactlly what he went through..Mask for his face to help him breath but then giving morfin that sent him to his end...Wish you the best of luck in my contest.....Karen
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coooooooooo
i cryed and starded to feel like u know how i feel u have the sadest life i love u ohhhh i love you so much
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