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The singer didn't write the song.

I didn't run away,
I walked slowly,
Hoping you'd notice,
But you must have been busy,
Cause I never came home that night,
Now It's tomorrow,
And It's so cold and confusing here,
Sometimes I forget to shake,
And every time I see this end,
A whole new one begins,
Now It's been a week,
So I thought I'd call,
I must have been speaking incoherently,
Because you didn't seem to understand,
And with every breathe I tried harder,
Because everyone else stopped listening,
Now It's been around a month,
And I must have fell asleep,
Cause I'm no longer where I stand,
I can't hear the lights,
I can't feel the sounds,
The clocks watch me,
Counting down the seconds.

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  • Mk gautam
    May 17, 2007
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    WONDERFUL WORK!


  • Emo Cowboy14
    May 14, 2007

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    wow. its diffent in a good way. i hope you dont have to feel like this every day. it must suck if you do.